Thursday, 18 September 2014
Friday, 12 September 2014
Give your story a captivating title
|Terry the Turtle and Cleo the Clownish|
Terry the Turtle and Cleo Clownfish.
Cleo wants to go to the concert to see Miley Starfish.
In the morning before lunch.
This narrative story takes place at the bottom of the ocean in Bikini Bottom at a high school.
What is the cause of the problem?
What are the characters doing? Have you describe their feelings?
Include language features to support key ideas.
Include some engaging dialogue in your story.
The cause of this problem is that Cleo wants to ditch school and go to Miley Starfish’s concert.
Cleo the Clown Fish is feeling excited and happy because she wants to go to Miley Starfish’s concert, Terry the turtle is feeling upset because he doesn't want Cleo to go to the Miley Starfish concert he wants her to stay at school and make the right choice.
Cleo sneaks out of school anyway, leaving Terry behind wondering why she is going. He feels sad and doesn’t know whether to tell his teacher or not. He doesn’t want to tell on his best friend but he doesn’t want to see her get into even bigger trouble if she gets caught.
He slowly walks to his classroom deciding he has to tell an adult, when all of a sudden, Cleo slaps him on the shell, smiling. Terry is surprised to see her and she tells him that he was right and she can’t ditch school, she doesn’t want to disappoint her family.
They walk into class together still being the best of best friends.
How is this problem solved?
The problem is solved by Cleo the Clown Fish coming back to school and not going to Miley Starfish’s concert she wants to wait until she is older, Terry is happy that she came to the right decision and stayed at school.
This is my Narrtive Framework about my story that is called Terry The Turtle and Cleo the clownfish